Naver
Map : You Can Go Anywhere!
These days, people want to find the way
they want to go or they are sometimes lost on the street. If you want to go
anywhere that don’t waste times, follow these direction to use “ Naver map”
application that gives you fastest and right way.
First,
click the play store app. You put on “Naver map” in searching bar, and download
it. Next, open the application. Then click the three lines button. Third, you
can see a lot of buttons. These are different ways to find a way. This
application is allows you to find a fastest route on feet or by using
transportation. It even show your current location..
If you follow all of these steps, you will
have no trouble finding your way.
I think your paragraph is good, but i want to give you some advice.
답글삭제Why don't you replace first sentence to 'These days, people want to find the way when they don't know how to go to the place and they get lost on the street'.
And it might be better to replace 'that don't waste times' to 'not wasting time'.
I think the first sentence is awkward, but It was nice to seperate the three section to the paragraph.
답글삭제hey myungsoo
답글삭제your paragraph is good and informative.
i think all you need to do is check some grammar and it'll be solid
Jae Yong
Hi Myungsoo.
답글삭제I also usually use 'naver map' app to find a way that I have not ever gone. I also think if someone who can't find the way in strange place can find a way which he want.
However, I think you'd better to be specific.
thanks.
Seung-yeob, Paik